And I’m not feeling this story much at all. Not sure when or how he turned into a prick in my head but he did. Has this happened to you before where a character becomes something you don’t like? A part of me suggests that should be a good thing, meaning that the character is human in my head. Characters shouldn’t be perfect people living perfect lives. With that said, sometimes you end up with a difficult character to write. Like a part of me wants to blow him up and walk away.
Although the emergence of the Astral Syndicate seems interesting to me so I feel like I ought to continue with the story just to see that play out if nothing else.